Cages-Becoming the Caged PART OF THE NEXT CHAPTER UP!
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CHAPTER TEN (Messed up on the last number.)
I woke the next morning from a wonderful dream. I was hoping I could savor it for a few more moments and closed my eyes again, resting my head back in Jay’s lap. I then sighed, opening my eyes and looking up at his face. He was still asleep, his jaw slightly slack. I grinned softly at his expression in sleep and kissed his cheek. His jaw tightened and I saw him smile in his sleep.
He looks cute…when he smiles… I thought, but quickly wiped the thought away. I couldn’t fall in love with anyone. There was no guarantee if I was to be bred that I’d be bred to Jay. I sat up and stared around the cage at everyone else. Autumn was also asleep, her arms folded across her stomach, which I noticed look rather big for three and a half months. I sighed gently and looked over at Kayla. She was sleeping rather fitfully, but Rose was sleeping rather well. I rested my head over Kayla’s neck, as if to drive her bad dream away.
After a few moments, I could hear Jay yawn and stir. His dark teal eyes blinked open and he looked at me for a split second and smiled. “Hey.”
“Hey.” I smiled back at him and watched as he sat up and stretched his arms out. “Sleep well?”
“Yep,” he yawned again and blinked his wide teal eyes at me. His eyes are so beautiful…I thought, but once again pushed the thought to the back of my head. I sighed gently to myself.
“Something wrong?” Jay asked, scooting over to sit next to me.
“What? No, nothing’s wrong,” I told him. “Everything’s…fine.”
He frowned. “Are you hiding something from me?” he asked.
“What? H-hiding something? N-no,” I said as he moved a little closer. One of his hands went over mine, and I blushed softly.
“I think you are,” he smiled gently and got a little closer. “You can tell me if you want…”
I bit my lip. “Oh Jay,” I murmured. My heart pounded violently inside of my chest. “T-the truth is…I think that I might like you…or maybe…love you?”
Jay didn’t look surprised, as I thought he would. “Well…maybe…I love you too,” he murmured, then pressed his lips against mine.
So this was it. My first kiss. His lips were warm against mine, and I wrapped my arms around his neck. His hands went down towards my hips, and I closed my eyes. I wanted this to last forever…
A sudden door slamming behind me cut it off, however, and I pulled away from Jay. I noticed a man walking down the hallway, and I sighed, wondering what was going to happen now.
I woke the next morning from a wonderful dream. I was hoping I could savor it for a few more moments and closed my eyes again, resting my head back in Jay’s lap. I then sighed, opening my eyes and looking up at his face. He was still asleep, his jaw slightly slack. I grinned softly at his expression in sleep and kissed his cheek. His jaw tightened and I saw him smile in his sleep.
He looks cute…when he smiles… I thought, but quickly wiped the thought away. I couldn’t fall in love with anyone. There was no guarantee if I was to be bred that I’d be bred to Jay. I sat up and stared around the cage at everyone else. Autumn was also asleep, her arms folded across her stomach, which I noticed look rather big for three and a half months. I sighed gently and looked over at Kayla. She was sleeping rather fitfully, but Rose was sleeping rather well. I rested my head over Kayla’s neck, as if to drive her bad dream away.
After a few moments, I could hear Jay yawn and stir. His dark teal eyes blinked open and he looked at me for a split second and smiled. “Hey.”
“Hey.” I smiled back at him and watched as he sat up and stretched his arms out. “Sleep well?”
“Yep,” he yawned again and blinked his wide teal eyes at me. His eyes are so beautiful…I thought, but once again pushed the thought to the back of my head. I sighed gently to myself.
“Something wrong?” Jay asked, scooting over to sit next to me.
“What? No, nothing’s wrong,” I told him. “Everything’s…fine.”
He frowned. “Are you hiding something from me?” he asked.
“What? H-hiding something? N-no,” I said as he moved a little closer. One of his hands went over mine, and I blushed softly.
“I think you are,” he smiled gently and got a little closer. “You can tell me if you want…”
I bit my lip. “Oh Jay,” I murmured. My heart pounded violently inside of my chest. “T-the truth is…I think that I might like you…or maybe…love you?”
Jay didn’t look surprised, as I thought he would. “Well…maybe…I love you too,” he murmured, then pressed his lips against mine.
So this was it. My first kiss. His lips were warm against mine, and I wrapped my arms around his neck. His hands went down towards my hips, and I closed my eyes. I wanted this to last forever…
A sudden door slamming behind me cut it off, however, and I pulled away from Jay. I noticed a man walking down the hallway, and I sighed, wondering what was going to happen now.
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Re: Cages-Becoming the Caged PART OF THE NEXT CHAPTER UP!
Ok, I saw this and was like "Eh, what the heck, I'll read it". And this was the most disturbing thing I've ever read.
Please continue, I'm addicted xD
Please continue, I'm addicted xD
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Lawl. Okay I'll write more tomorrow probably.
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Heh heh heh....>=) I approve.
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YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! *dies of happieness* DARN! now how am I going to read the chapter? D:< XD
This ROCKS! It is the BEST STORY IN TEH WORLD!!! YUSH. Well mayB. IDK XD
This ROCKS! It is the BEST STORY IN TEH WORLD!!! YUSH. Well mayB. IDK XD
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I really like this, even though it's slightly disturbing! xD
That's the beauty of it, eh? Jk
Anyways, I do like this! It's very good!
Can't wait until the next Chapter! 8D
That's the beauty of it, eh? Jk
Anyways, I do like this! It's very good!
Can't wait until the next Chapter! 8D
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I like the new chapter so far! ^^ I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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MUAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! *Evil lightning flashes in background* .................*Silence* Ahem. Anyways, great partial-chappie! ^^
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No prob. looking forward to the rest.
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Interesting plot... (:
I think it would be interesting if they tried to breed the MC but turns out she is already prego... perhaps with jonathan's (i think it was..) baby?
I think it would be interesting if they tried to breed the MC but turns out she is already prego... perhaps with jonathan's (i think it was..) baby?
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Sounds good, but I was thinking something different.
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- She does get pregnant in the second book though.
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Ooh, interesting. So will this end up being like a series of books? (:
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Yesh. I shall wait VEERRRRYYY patiently................ *explodes*
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.....ARGH. Rebbeca wants more o.o I'm-a-gonna die. *cages ROCKS*
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:3 I love it.
I started reading it this morning, and I got in trouble because I couldn't stop. Haha. How does that make you feel? Well, it should make you feel pretty dang good, considering I don't usually get into stories like I did with this one.
I started reading it this morning, and I got in trouble because I couldn't stop. Haha. How does that make you feel? Well, it should make you feel pretty dang good, considering I don't usually get into stories like I did with this one.
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