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Post by littletoes101 11/3/2009, 6:39 pm

Chapter Five
I watched helplessly as Autumn and another kid were dragged into a little room, Autumn screeching her lungs out all the way.
I waited for hours after she was gone, trying to keep my eyes open for her. Kayla and Rose had already fallen asleep after her screeches ended. I would occasionally hear a yell or a scream, but everyone remained asleep.
I guess my body had enough, because I rembered drifting off to sleep as I heard the door to the little door open...
The next morning, Autumn was at her usual place in front of the cage. I could see the tearstains on her dirty white face though. I curled up closer to her, then fell asleep, letting her image grow fuzzy in my mind.
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/3/2009, 6:44 pm

Sad I don't like them. Mean people! Evil or Very Mad
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Post by littletoes101 11/3/2009, 6:49 pm

Well how'd you like that? Two chaps in a day, WEWT.
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/3/2009, 6:50 pm

cheers Yay! lolz
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Post by catbuster 11/3/2009, 8:58 pm

*Gasp* those breeders are despicable I HATE THEM!!!! Please write more soon though!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 11/3/2009, 10:22 pm

How about 3 in one day? XDDDD
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Post by littletoes101 11/3/2009, 10:31 pm

Naw. Too lazy.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 11/4/2009, 1:00 am

Awe c'mon. Pwease?
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Post by littletoes101 11/4/2009, 8:21 am

Maybe a new chap er two today..
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/4/2009, 8:22 am

Yesh!
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Post by littletoes101 11/4/2009, 8:30 am

Chapter Six
The next morning, I woke up to find Autumn pacing the cage nervously, her eyes wide with fear.
"What is it?" I asked.
"They took the blood test, to see if she was pregnant," Kayla answered, her eyes bleak. Rose meanwhile kept on sleeping, unaware of the things to come.
"Hey, what's wrong with your friend," a new voice spoke. I turned my head to the source, and saw a boy about my age. He had thin, dark hair and large green eyes. His skin was a pale, dirty white.
"She got...bred yesterday," I gulped.
He nodded thoughtfully. "I can understand why that would make someone nervous. So, what's your name?"
"Elizabeth. You?"
"Matthew."
I smiled. "Matthew, huh, nice name."
I froze as the door opened, and one of the testers came in. Those are the people that test your blood after a breeding to see if you're pregnant.
I heard the tester murmur something to Autumn, and I saw my friend freeze and then slump on the floor with a cry. "What did she say?" I asked.
Autumn looked up, eyes full of tears. "I-I am pregnant!"
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/4/2009, 8:31 am

Woah! Intriguing! Continue please. Very Happy
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Post by littletoes101 11/4/2009, 8:35 am

I can't, I got to head for the bus soon, so I gotta get off now. See ya later, loving fans!
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/4/2009, 8:36 am

Oh, ok. Bye! Looking forward to more! Cages-Becoming the Caged PART OF THE NEXT CHAPTER UP! - Page 3 Icon_twisted
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Post by catbuster 11/4/2009, 5:33 pm

Oh no! That's sad but it's better than if she wasn't because then she would prolly be bred again.....
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Post by Jinx 11/4/2009, 5:36 pm

Oooooh.You have gained yourself another fan.
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Post by littletoes101 11/4/2009, 5:54 pm

I wrote some more at school. :3
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Post by Mrs. Twarry Matsuda 11/4/2009, 7:38 pm

Well, POST IT THEN!
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/4/2009, 7:40 pm

If you wrote some more then put it up already! :3
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/4/2009, 7:56 pm

I got to read three chapters all at once, and I liked it. x33 Awesomeful job!! Poor Autumn . . .
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Post by littletoes101 11/4/2009, 9:42 pm

Yes. More bad things will happen to her...like getting shot..
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/4/2009, 9:45 pm

Woah! Neutral But, please continue!
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/4/2009, 9:46 pm

Aww. xDD You spoiled it.

That sounds epic, though. Very Happy
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Post by littletoes101 11/4/2009, 9:51 pm

Not really, more horrible things happen to our poor Autumn.
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/4/2009, 9:52 pm

Then write about them! D:< lolz, Pwease? Very Happy
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