Cages-Becoming the Caged PART OF THE NEXT CHAPTER UP!
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Re: Cages-Becoming the Caged PART OF THE NEXT CHAPTER UP!
Uhh maybe later, im going to the dentist now
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It's so disturbing, it's interesting. Awesome.
I like. More, please?
I like. More, please?
Kiriana Shadeweaver- Short Story Writer
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I need to think of an action for the fourth chappie
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Does anyone have any ideas for chapter four?
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Hmmm maybe you should introduce us to the new girl a little more or maybe speed up time or something like that.
catbuster- Novella Composer
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Or maybe one of the girls start falling in love with someone, so when the dudes come and try to make them breed with this random person, they absolutely refuse and resist it as much as they can because they don't want to betray the person they love. I mean, sure, most of them are young, but still!
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Intriguingly disturbing. Keep going! Very nice!
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Chapter Four
I woke up that night to hear Rose crying softly. I looked around to find her, and as my eyes adjusted, I saw a figure holding her, murmuring softly. On closer inspection, I found that it was Autumn speaking softly. Curling up again, I decided not to bother them, and fell back asleep.
The next morning, Rose was back with Kayla, and Autumn was awake. She looked angry. “What is it?” I asked sleepily.
“They’re talking about breeding her again,” she hissed. “Kayla.”
My eyes widened. “So quickly after having her baby? That could kill her!”
“Like they care.”
Autumn’s face was twisted into unimaginable rage, her body shaking. Kayla’s eyes were wide with fear.
One of the breeders came around, with a rope noose. Then, in shock, I noticed Autumn being pulled from the cage.
MWAHAHAHA I made it short on purpose.
I woke up that night to hear Rose crying softly. I looked around to find her, and as my eyes adjusted, I saw a figure holding her, murmuring softly. On closer inspection, I found that it was Autumn speaking softly. Curling up again, I decided not to bother them, and fell back asleep.
The next morning, Rose was back with Kayla, and Autumn was awake. She looked angry. “What is it?” I asked sleepily.
“They’re talking about breeding her again,” she hissed. “Kayla.”
My eyes widened. “So quickly after having her baby? That could kill her!”
“Like they care.”
Autumn’s face was twisted into unimaginable rage, her body shaking. Kayla’s eyes were wide with fear.
One of the breeders came around, with a rope noose. Then, in shock, I noticed Autumn being pulled from the cage.
MWAHAHAHA I made it short on purpose.
Re: Cages-Becoming the Caged PART OF THE NEXT CHAPTER UP!
I can't that would be unfair to my other two or three fans...XD
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Also, shortie chappies give me more things to write about in the next chappie.
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