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Post by Jesus4Eternity 5/31/2010, 10:57 am

"Naw, it's just the honeymoon phase. We've only been dating for a week or so, so it's basically like obsession. Be lucky I'm sane enough to talk to you now." I joked, ingoring Noah's message.

[He comes in now and we start arguing?]
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 5/31/2010, 12:18 pm

Noah knocks rafts his knuckles softly on the door. The room fills with thud noises. "Amanda! You never answered any of my texts!" He said. I glanced at Amanda...Oh no. "He seems upset." I spoke where only Amanda could hear.

[Bold, is someone else speaking from my POV.]

[The number I sent you was my home phone. Check email for real number.]
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 5/31/2010, 12:37 pm

I took a deep breath and opened the door. "Noah...." I began softly, leaving my phone on my bed. "Miranda and I are in the middle of something. I haven't seen her in two weeks. Calm down. You know if I would have answered your texts or calls that I would have been distrracted. Please don't make us fight on Valentine's Day, Noah." I kept my voice steady and sure.
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 5/31/2010, 1:54 pm

[Over-dramatizing. Here I come.]

"Exactly it's Valentine's Day! We were suppose to spend it together!" How could she not grasp that!? "Besides, she's a monster." I pointed at Miranda, she was dangerous. A frown came over here face, and she muttered a, "No, i'm not."
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 5/31/2010, 2:27 pm

"Shhhh." I whispered, hugging him tightly. "Noah, things happen. You wouldn't be over-reacting like this if my mother had a heart attack or something, and if you did, I'd break up with you." My hands came around him, rubbing his back gently. "Miranda's safe. I trust her. And I hung out with her today because I knew you wouldn't overreact. I knew you'd know why. But since you don't, I guess I don't have much of a choice. Please."
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 5/31/2010, 3:58 pm

I let out a loud laugh, "I don't even trust myself Amanda."
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 5/31/2010, 4:00 pm

"Well I trust you."
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 6/13/2010, 8:05 pm

My eyes flared with an intense emotion: anger. "You shouldn't. I'll kill you Amanda! You'll never see me coming." A small burst of energy, and I was invisible. I reappeared in a flash, my expression the same as before.

[Sorry I was on a cruise.]
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/14/2010, 2:46 pm

"Not the point!" I realized. "Noah," I began, turning to him, "The heart of the matter is that I do enjoy spending time with you, and I do enjoy spending time with Miranda. However, since I haven't seen her in two weeks, and since she's... a vampire," I lowered my voice, "I think I can spend tonight with her. I really wish it wasn't Valentine's Day, but Noah, I have a rule I follow. 'Guys come and go, but friends are forever.' I also, with few exeptions, do what I said I'd do first. This is one of those exceptions. I'm sorry." I hugged him tightly, hoping he'd understand. "I have to do this, Noah. I can find another boyfriend if you break up with me and I want one. I can't find another friend like Miranda, and certainly not one that's a vampire. I choose you over her almost all the time, so just let me have some girl time." I whispered, and then shut the door very quietly.
"Did I do that okay?"

[It's okay- how was the cruise?]
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 6/20/2010, 6:14 pm

Noah nodded and quietly left left. She must've really struck a nerve. With him leaving, Amanda, the impending akwardness of continuing this conversation, and I were the only things taking up space in the room. The akwardness filled it mostly, I just really had no idea what to say. My mouth hung ajar for a moment before I shut it. "Sure." One-word answers weren't going to help... No, not at all.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/20/2010, 6:28 pm

"So... how did you become a vampire?" I asked as I heard my door slam. "Why bit you? What did it feel like? When? I want to know everything!" I was trying to fill the awkwardness by asking about Volterra.
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 6/20/2010, 6:40 pm

"Amanda, please." I rolled my eyes, "It hurts to get bit, it hurts a lot." My left hand casually reached up, covering the bite mark. She was simply filling akwardness with more akwardness. I ignored the other questions, except for one, why, this was also the one i've asked myself many a times. The answer was always the same; "Because I have an ability."
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/20/2010, 7:08 pm

"Y-Yeah, I know." I said quietly, thinking about Noah. I had made the right choice... right?
"So what did you do in Volterra as a vampire? Were you a member of the Voultri for a while?"
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 6/20/2010, 7:18 pm

"Yep." I said with a false sweetness. "Actually-" I had a sadistic smile played up, "I enjoyed it, being a member of the guard, its interesting. I change, but i'm afraid that's all it will ever be, something new in my life, that was orignally swapped with something old." I could hear Amanda's measured heartbeat.

-Bad dum- -Bad dum- -Bad dum- -Bad dum- -Bad dum- -Bad dum-

No.
I can't let her get close,
for the world as I know it,
will come crashing

down.


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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/20/2010, 9:37 pm

"Just a change? Miranda! You are a vampire, and you call that just a change?!" I kept my voice quiet, but it was filled with appalling words. "You have to hunt! You have to be careful everywhere you go! You can... what's your power?"
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 6/21/2010, 3:22 pm

I gave her a snide smile, "Please, all of this is something that varies the ordinary; change. Sure-" I shrugged, " This was something that ended my humanity, but it's fine." I chimed in with the final comment nonchalently. "Oh, and I can turn invisible...Something, Something, atoms scrambling, yada yadda ya, I lose my scent." I dismissed the thought with a single wave of my hand through the air.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/21/2010, 5:01 pm

"You can flipping turn invisible, and you don't even care!" I was jumpy and bouncy and giggly, and she absolutly didn't care about being a vampire? "Miranda... you're amazing. You're this amazingly ancient creature with old ties and great history in the present, and you just call it a change? It's much, much more!"
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 6/21/2010, 5:08 pm

Severe the ties, Now! I chanted in a mantra like style, "I don't care, it won't be much more if I do not allow it!" Yelling at Amanda made me feel a little relieve. Walking towards the window, I opened it gently, "Change isn't everlasting, neither is friendship. For I shall never have a friend that understands...." My darkend eyes were hollow;empty, as I exited via window. "This is for the best." I whispered unaware that she could most likely here it. Running, all I seemed to do, all I will ever do.
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 6/22/2010, 3:41 pm

[Okay, so I was at Target, and there I saw it! A foam mace, thats a fake weapon made of foam with foam spikes sticking out of the ball, and a foam axe, they were both $1]
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/24/2010, 5:04 pm

My face fell, and I looked uncertain. "Miranda...?" I asked quietly, biting my lip. And once I realized what had happened, I didn't know what to do. But I at least had one apology to make.
I dialed Noah's number and left a message. "Noah... I'm sorry about tonight. It didn't work out the way I wanted either. If you want, we can hang out now- I really need someone to talk to about what happened. Sorry." I ended the call after leaving voicemail, staring out the window. "What did I do to cause this?" I whispered, almost to myself. "I don't understand."
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