Re: The Night World; Book One: Finding Love In The Darkness

by IRuleTheWorld 3/2/2010, 8:20 pm

[What would add plot...is more people..]

I looked at Amanda extremely concerned, "Amanda." I asked in a soft tone, "Are you alright? You look...sick." I had no idea what to do for sick people, or atleast sick humans. Teva was now playing with a yo-yo, I mentally face-palmed myself, "Teva's no help right now..soo are you suppose to go to the doctor, or something?"

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/2/2010, 8:25 pm

[Like, more charries, or what? 'Cuz I'll make more peeps if ya want.]

"I'm fine, Benjamin." I muttered, my head dropping into my hand as I rubbed my temples. I had a killer headache right now, and I was freezing cold.

by IRuleTheWorld 3/2/2010, 8:35 pm

[YES!]

"Liar." I murmured. "Teva, go get Amanda some blankets." I narrowed my eyes, "And give her the remote control." I said with authority. Teva willingly complied, only after almost whinning her way out of it. "Good." I nodded smiling. I glanced over at Amanda, "Don't give Teva anything you have. Whatever it is, she'll use it to destroy my home." Who knew that a bouncy ball and dinosaur-shaped chicken nuggets could nearly destroy half of the city. I shivered at the thought.

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/2/2010, 8:41 pm

[Nice. xD]

I rolled my eyes. "Do you ever believe me, Benjamin?" I muttered, pulling my knees up to my chest, like I always did.

by IRuleTheWorld 3/2/2010, 8:51 pm

I blinked and paused for a moment, thinking back, "Uh..Yes." I sighed, "Amanda." I whispered so quietly Amanda was the only who heard it, " Forget about the vamp thing. Don't mention it to anyone. No ifs ands or buts."

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/2/2010, 8:55 pm

"Why would I tell anyone?" I asked, shivering.

by IRuleTheWorld 3/2/2010, 9:02 pm

I shook my head, "I'm not saying you would. I'm paranoid about these kinds of things." I dismissed that conversation with a wave of my hand, "Anways what did I miss in school?" I asked trying to strike something up, so there wouldn't be any akward silence.

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/2/2010, 9:03 pm

"Uhm.... test... dissection..." My vision was fading at the edges. "Uhm..."

by IRuleTheWorld 3/2/2010, 9:09 pm

I closed my eyes, "Alright. I'll be fine, however, you won't be unless you rest now." I smiled, "It's okay, I won't let Teva break your face." I said this as sincerly as possible.

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/2/2010, 9:13 pm

I smiled as my vision went black, my head falling.

[Pick. Shoulder or lap. xD]

Name: Lucas 'Luke' Thitmon
Looks: Dark blond hair that hangs in his eyes, deep brown eyes, smile.
Personality: Quiet, but more expressive when you get to know him. Likes reading and writing, very scholarly, and likes music.
Species: Vampire
Soulmate?: If we don't do Benjamin-Amanda, it'll be him and me. Very Happy

Age: 15 [he's Lamia.]
Anything Else?: Nu-uh.

by IRuleTheWorld 3/3/2010, 7:58 pm

[We have too many Vampires..]

Jesus4Eternity wrote:I smiled as my vision went black, my head falling.

[Pick. Shoulder or lap. xD]

Name: Lucas 'Luke' Thitmon
Looks: Dark blond hair that hangs in his eyes, deep brown eyes, smile.
Personality: Quiet, but more expressive when you get to know him. Likes reading and writing, very scholarly, and likes music.
Species: Vampire
Soulmate?: If we don't do Benjamin-Amanda, it'll be him and me.
Age: 15 [he's Lamia.]
Anything Else?: Nu-uh.

[Shoulder or lap what?]

I looked around. Me + Ninjaness=awesomeness. I stood at the top of the staircase that overlooked the family room, which is where the targets are. Now, I had two options; A- Slide down the railing. Fun, or B- Do a ninja move fall onto the spare couch, tumble off, and stand back up into a fighting stance. Hmm...Option A o Option B. B. I decided. This was going to work out excellent, or so I thought. Vaulting off the wood railing, over the edge, I did a flip and practically landed on my head. Wincing in pain, I knew I had to move forward. Amanda was sleeping, with Benjamin sitting near here, not paying attention. This is my chance, Gotta go big or go home! I rapidly rolled off the couch, and popped up lickety-split. I crouched down and pounced on the sleeping Amanda. Benji-Boy let out a fierce growl. That caused me to smile with victory.

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/3/2010, 8:01 pm

[Nvm]

"Gyak!" I was jerked to the present, alert as anything. "What the heck, Teva?" I shook my hair back. "What are you doing?"

by IRuleTheWorld 3/3/2010, 8:07 pm

I gave an innocent smile, and faced my palms up. Adding to the effect, I tilted my head slightly, "How are you feeling?" I spoke geniunely. I brushed my bangs out of my face, "Old habits die hard, being a Cat-ShapeShifter, and being a kick butt Ninja I can't help it." I motioned over to Benjamin, "He's been sitting there staring at you, your like a sitting duck." Patting her shoulder, I gave another smile, slightly different. I gave a reassuring smile, and flipped my hair.

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/3/2010, 8:09 pm

"Psh. Ninjas pwn." I giggled, pulling my hair into a quick ponytail so it wouldn't get in my way.
[How should Luke come in?]

by IRuleTheWorld 3/3/2010, 8:12 pm

[Maybe knowing Benjamin, or stalking us.]

I sighed, "I know. Sometimes though I wish I could be human." I said quietly looking out a window, "Not feeling like a monster, but mostly I am happy. ShapeShifters pwn. " I nodded smiling, and bopped Amanda gentley on the forehead, "Shouldda had a V8."

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/3/2010, 8:20 pm

[I'll go with knowing Benjamin. xD]

I nervously walked up to Benjamin's doorstep, knocking lightly on the door. I could smell... human? Huh.

by IRuleTheWorld 3/3/2010, 8:23 pm

I snickered, "I'll answer it, so Benjamin doesn't have to leave his precious human." I whipped the door open, "We don't wan't your cookies, so leave us alone!" Looking at the guy standing at the door, I was shocked. Curse you girl scouts! I took a deep breath in.

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/3/2010, 8:27 pm

"I can get up, you know, Teva." I heard from inside as a tall, blond, human girl walked in. "I'm not a girl scout." I said rather shakily. "I'm Lucas Thitmon."

by IRuleTheWorld 3/3/2010, 8:31 pm

I screamed, "Benjamin! Get over here and greet your guest! AND get Amanda and me some dinosaur chicken nuggets!" Benji was at the front door in a mere nanosecond, "Sorry." He murmured. I gave him a smug look.

I looked over at Luke, "Sorry." I rolled my eyes at Teva before turning back to him, "Teva hates girl scouts.." Teva scowled at the mention, "Anyways, how are you? Oh, come in." I stepped into the house and motioned him to come inside.

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/3/2010, 8:33 pm

"You have dinosaur chicken nuggets?" I was now hyper.
"Fine, thanks." I smiled in his direction. "I'm Amanda, by the way." The human girl smiled, bouncing up and down.
Was that normal?

by IRuleTheWorld 3/3/2010, 8:38 pm

I clapped my hands together, my eyes lite up, "Let's go raid his freezer!" I bolted off, "Amanda if you don't come I won't share with you!" I screeched. I found them quickly, ha ha ha. Luckily I made Benjamin buy these, "Amanda, you know how to work a microwave, right? Or an Oven?" I wasn't sure how to use either of these appliances.

I nodded in Luke's direction, "Yeah it's normal, though Teva is more hyper. She calls herself 'The Ninja' and pounces on people. Ask Amanda for a first-hand account." Those two. Exteremly high mantinence.

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/3/2010, 8:56 pm

"Bye!" I giggled, running towards the kitchen and grabbed the bag from Teva. "How many do you want?" I turned to the living room. "BENJAMIN! DO YOU WANT ANY DINOSAUR CHICKEN NUGGETS?!"
"That's... interesting." I chuckled as she ran into the kitchen.

by IRuleTheWorld 3/3/2010, 9:02 pm

I flinch as I hear a loud crash come from the kitchen, "Make all of them Amanda!" I hear Teva shout. Answering Amanda's question I shouted, "No thank you." I faced Luke, "So what'cha doing here?" I asked nonchalantly, and I resisted the urge to throw the dinosaurs away. Those girls were ridiculous.

by **Jesus4Eternity** 3/3/2010, 9:04 pm

[NO, BENJI! THE DINOS ARE AWESOME!!!]

"Okay!" I giggled, putting them on a plate and starting the microwave. I then skipped into the entryway and looked at Luke. "Want any?" He shook his head. "Okay!" While skipping back, I tripped. Gyah. I was such a klutz.
Seeing the girl fall (and assuming humans would get hurt if they hit the floor), I caught her by the shoulders, righting her gently. "You okay?"
"Y-yeah. I'm fine."

by IRuleTheWorld 3/3/2010, 9:13 pm

I walked out of the kitchen, "Luke, I think you should leave." I told him honestly. My face somber. Benjamin's mouth hung open, but I shot him a glance, then my eyes flickered over to Amanda and then back at Benji. He understood instantly what I was talking about, before nodding.

[Let's see how much Luke likes to push boundaries..Shall we?]

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