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The Night World; Book One: Finding Love In The Darkness

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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/7/2010, 5:12 pm

I pondered this thought for a moment, thinking how to phrase this, "Do you want some pudding too?" I asked loud enough for the hidding Kieran to hear. His eyes widen in surprise, but then he shook his head. " You're very bad at hiding, well atleast for a cat." I added the last comment, proud of my abilities.

"Shoot." I muttered darkly. The ShapeShifter had seen me, I immediately wondered how long she knew I was here. Obviously long enough.. She was very...proud of herself, looking at the human, I now questioned how she was going to react.


[I saw Alice in Wonderland. Smile ]
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/7/2010, 5:26 pm

"Who are you talking to?" I asked, getting the pudding out.
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/7/2010, 5:58 pm

I waved a hand off towards the window, "Some guy. Night Worldly." Shrugging, "He's a witch, or so I think." I was completely calm about this.

I swallowed hard. This is not going well.. I rolled my eyes at what the one girl said, Wait....Did they tell the human about Night World. My eyes widened in shock. I needed to leave, I was not going to get in trouble for this. Nope.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/7/2010, 9:17 pm

"Ooo-kayyy...." I muttered.
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/8/2010, 6:47 pm

I shook my head with my hair tossing, "Can't stop me now." I whispered airily. In a flash I went out the door, and stood behind Kieran, "Soo...Who are you?" I asked wickedly with a large grin. Nope, I am not messing 'round.

I swallowed hard, "Kieran." This isn't going good, at all... She smirked, and told me her name was Teva.

After they left, I hung out for a few minutes at my place. Finally, I noticed Teva. Infront of her was a guy, a witch. She must've caught him observing them behind a tree, but why is the question. Immediately, I wondered where Amanda was? Hopefully inside, or atleast that's what the optimistic side said. The pessimistic side of me told that she was dead. Reasoning I assumed she was inside. Teva would have killed the he-witch if he had killed Amanda...
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/8/2010, 7:06 pm

I went to get the pudding out of the FREEZER, taking a test bite and ENJOYING it.
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/8/2010, 7:17 pm

[GOSH.]

Seeing the expression on Benjamin's face, I eased his worries, "She's inside." Turning back to Kieran, I placed my hands firmly on his shoulders, "Now. You. You're going to explain everything inside of Amanda's house." I chided in a respectful, yet dominate tone. He just nodded. I patted him on the head, "Good witch." He said something cold... and angerily, and with such ferocity that I had no choice, but to step backwards.

She just touched me. She touched me. Yeah, I don't do that. "Says the flithy animal vermin." I spat angerily. Teva stumbled backwards, fear evidently across her face. I knew I took a step too far, but i'm not going to tell her that.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/8/2010, 7:25 pm

[Teehee]

I was debating going outside, but I had a feeling it was one of those 'Night World' things and I shouldn't interfere. So I had another bite of frozen pudding.
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/8/2010, 7:59 pm

[Amanda...C'mon join the conflict..]

I was dumbfounded, "Really?" I asked in awe, "Did you really just say that, He-witch." I said with venom drenching every single word. Kieran just nodded, I was going for his throat, but Benjamin held me back.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/8/2010, 8:00 pm

And then I decided that I didn't care. So I walked outside.
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/8/2010, 8:08 pm

As I held Teva back, I noticed Amanda walk outside, "Uhh..hi." I said blankly. Teva pulled me forward, "Calm down! CALM DOWN! I said to her, in a completely nonsoothening way. "Teva. You're err..Better than him." She was going to shift any minute, and Kieran had a none-caring attitued about her.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/8/2010, 8:27 pm

"I knew it was one of those Night World things. I'm staying anyway."
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/8/2010, 8:29 pm

[Should they be soulmates...? Razz I don't care if their my characters. I want your advice. Then'll post. ]
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/8/2010, 8:33 pm

[Yush. It'd be cool.]
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/8/2010, 8:39 pm

[Are you answering honestly? xD]
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/8/2010, 8:42 pm

[Why would I not?]
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/8/2010, 9:22 pm

[Hmm...Good point. Don't worry. This isn't descriptive.]

Benjamin finally let go of me, he must have felt the building rage inside of me, figuring I was going to shift. I wish he hadn't, because Kieran, the not very wise guy, hadn't moved at all. And I, for one, wasn't planning what happend next. Before Benji let go, I was leaning forward trying to attack Kieran. So when his grip left me, it sent me into an unbalanced mode. I fell into Kieran, and I kissed him, yes I did kiss him. Just barely, and I felt the connection between us. His thoughts seeped into my mind, likewise for him. I smiled at his fond memories of his childhood, gasped at horrors, and laughed along with him. It felt like we had known each other forever.

This..is..weird.. I commented in my mind, not knowing what to expect.

Yeah, I know... He replied succiently. This was all moving way too fast, quickly I pushed him away from me, because unknowingly his arms had made their way around me. Soulmates...? Pfft...As if. I didn't believe in Soulmates, they were pure myth, something elders tell children.


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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/9/2010, 8:16 pm

[Amanda is never going to reply :/ ]
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/9/2010, 8:55 pm

I slowly stepped back, gripping Benjamin's wrist and dragging him inside quietly.

[Razz Benji's not gonna be at school tomorrow. I'll bet.]
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/9/2010, 9:22 pm

[He has a viral infection...]
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/9/2010, 9:23 pm

[I dun like it when he's sick. I have a bigger chance of gettin' sick now! 'Cuz I hang out with him, like, 24/7. xD And the fact, that, ya know, he's like, my best friend. xD]
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/9/2010, 9:31 pm

[Thanks...x.x]
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[Reply. Wink]
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Post by IRuleTheWorld 3/9/2010, 9:38 pm

I followed Amanda inside, "Wow." was the only thing I could say, otherwise I was speechless. Teva and Kieran, soulmates? That was the most ridiculous thing ever.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/9/2010, 9:47 pm

"Well, no duh." I took my frozen pudding and stabbed the spoon into it.
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